HOW I REACHED SUN?

 HOW I REACHED SUN ?

LET ME THINK OF A STORY 
IN WHICH ALL PLANETS ARE A HIDDEN THEORY 
THE COUNTING OF PLANETS MUST BE STARTED FROM LAST 
SO AS TO REACH SUN VERY FAST.

THERE'S A NINTH PLANET , NAMED PLUTO WHICH IS DWARF . 
I THINK THAT IT IS HIDDEN INSIDE A SCARF .

THE EIGHTH PLANET IS NEPTUNE . 
I REMEMBERED THAT IT WAS SINGING A TUNE .

THE SEVENTH PLANET , URANUS IS FARTHEST .
HIS TEACHER TOLD ME THAT HE WAS GIVING A TEST .

THE SIXTH PLANET IS SATURN .
SEEING ITS RINGS WAS ACTUALLY A FUN . 
I SAW HER EATING A BUN .

THE LARGEST PLANET OF SOLAR SYSTEM IS JUPITER .
IT DOES NOT HAVE ANY LAND , SO IT CANNOT HOLD A PILLAR .

I THINK ON MARS THERE IS LIFE .
MAYBE , IT'S SOIL IS SO SOFT THAT IT CANBE CUT USING KNIFE .

THIS IS MY PLANET ON WHICH THERE'S LIFE .
HERE, THE VEGETABLES ARE CHOPPED USING KNIFE .
EARTH'S COLOUR IS WHITE , GREEN AND BLUE .
IT HAS TREES WHICH SECRETE GLUE .

VENUS IS THE HOTTEST PLANET ON WHICH I
WANT TO GO ON A LONG DRIVE IN MY CAR . 
IT IS ALSO CALLED 
MORNING AND EVENING STAR .

MERCURY IS THE PLANET NEAREST TO SUN . 
IN NIGHT , IT'S VERY COOL , BUT IN DAY IT BURNS .

FINALLY , I REACHED SUN WHICH IS VERY BIG AND HOT . 
ONE SECRET I WANT TO SHARE WITH YOU IS THAT 
I WANT TO BE AN ASTRONAUT .




by Raj Kumar Gupta 
  [ self composed ]

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Unknown said…
It's really very nice and a creative poem i wish you write 1000 of more poem like this
Keep it up and well done
SR said…
Yes, it is really very nice and creative pome and also all the best for your very big dream as a sun....
Vandan Kushwha said…
Very well composed! Keep it up!!👏👏